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From Goodreads: A young advertising whiz likes to lose control outside of work. Izzy finds herself in a world she never imagined when a Halloween terror trail turns real. The demons and monsters ravish her and themselves in front of her. She should be horrified but finds the pleasure too overwhelming to resist and gives into the burning urges to be out of control and taken. She explores things about herself that she has never done before even without her thinking she wanted it.
What this blurb should have said: Terrible writing ahead! Place cushion on forehead as there will be much banging, be it head to desk or ereader to head. There will be several WTF moments and not in a good way.
This could have been a deliciously horrific erotic (horrorotica) Halloween tale. Instead it’s a mess. It desperately needs editing. Desperately. I had a hard time seeing beyond the mistakes to the story itself and that makes me sad. It also makes me not want to pick up anything else by this author.
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