*Book source ~ Kindle Unlimited
It’s Christmas morning. Jessie and Dave are alone. But not for long. Two beasts are about to have themselves a real good Christmas.
First paragraph:
Smiling to myself, I carefully wrapped Dave’s present with care. This will certainly be the best Christmas ever! Now that I’m finally 23, my parents will let me move with him I bet.
She’s 23 and her parents won’t let her move in with her boyfriend. At 23. When most people are out there on their own, you know, being an adult. It all goes downhill from here, folks.
I can’t even. Literally. This is horribly, terribly bad. And not in a good way, as you would normally expect monster porn to be. The writing sucks. Was this even edited? Not bloody likely. Besides poor grammar, sentence structure, no transitions, shitty plot and zero character development, the author cannot keep track of body parts, clothing or condoms. Plus, Jessie is flipped around so many times I was expecting her to get whiplash and the contortions her body was put into were better than any gymnast I’ve ever seen. At one point there was even an extra cock floating around! Where the fuck did that come from?! She has three holes and there’s only two beasts. No problem. Ninja cock sneaks in to save the day!
And Dave? Poor, afterthought, redundant, Victorian-era outraged Dave who was tied up in the basement for hours and hours, but only manages to get loose after Jessie has been thoroughly fucked. He should have dropped that whiny-assed, bratty bitch the night before. Do not, I repeat, DO NOT, waste your time with this one. This is my Public Service Announcement. You’re welcome.
4
0
